This is my final solution.
The System I came up with was youth rebellion.. seeing roller skates representing a younger crowd.. and having them run over a city.. especially a church is rebelling or not conforming to beliefs of laws.. I hope this is something on the right track...
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I think your "anti-establishment" postcard is clearly explaining what is going on. I see the red cop as our enemy looking directly at us and we are the force rising against the establishment. So that message is clear. The supportive text also puts away any questions about the message. I like that you have closed in on the details of the system to reveal the system to the viewer. It seems to be working well. The wide scope of the roller skate plowing down the city isn't the system itself, it's the rebellion that must be described in a detail of that wide scope.
HEY man your RIGHT. I guess i did really narrow the scope of the last post card you made me.. I really like it and couldn't find a way to add more layers that would change the level of a product to a system. So I took the roller skate into the idea of youth and shows more of the destruction a youth might cause.. or in another way using your analogy and showing the reality maybe..cool..
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